Early marriages more likely to end in divorces?

Essay's Draft

Marriage= important institutional that bond 2 people formally through legal bond
agree= immature-cannot make up their mind
             blinded with the feeling of joy
             seeking for fun only
disagree= prevent unwanted crime-rape, abortion, baby dumping
                 can't control the great desire for sex

Writing

          Marriage  is an important institutional that bond a man and a woman  formally through legal action. Recently, the world had recorded a ahigh number of divorces, especially among those who get married at the very young age. So, it brings a great confusion to people wether early marriages more likely to end in divorces or vice versa.

           On one hand, early marriage does more likely to end in divorce as the young couple is considered immature enough to hold the great responsibilities as husband and wife and later infuture to bear children. They cannot make up their mind on what the most important thingh that they want to grab in their life. Basically these young people only love to seek for pleasure and fun. They bet marriage as the best platform to gain happiness. They are lefted unaware of the great responsibilities that awaited them in future. After sometime, they might get bored with the marriage and start to go for divorce.

           Next, those young people are not in a well state to provide such a strong foundation for a successful marriage. Most of them are not financially and economically stable to support their families. They cannot provide the proper and necessary items for their family members in ensuring their well being are being taken care kindly. They are even unable to provide healthy food, appropriate accomodation and comfortable transport for their wives and children. Some of them are still depending on their parents for the money supply. So, at the end, marital conflict woulld arise which then might lead to divorce.

         On the other hand, I do disagree that early marriages more likely to end in divorces. Nowadays, young people aware of the advantage of practicing early marriage. In fact, their parents are the one who encourage them to marry earlier by organising the arranged marriage for them. Marriage comes as the best solution for domestic crime crisis such as rape, abortion, and baby dumping. Those with great desire for sex are highly recommended for early marriages, in order to prevent them from doing any immoral acts that could badly affect their life. If they truly love their spouses, they would always look for cooperative solutions in difficulties and avoiding divorces.

          In conclusion, I totally agree that early marriages more likely to end in divorces. So, the people in authority, should plan a newer and sticter rules and regulations on the perrmission for marriages to take place amongst youngsters.